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I Want You To Need Me

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Posted Jul 3, 2008 at 01:09 PM by mulan

I want you to need me
Like the air you breathe
I want you to feel me
In everything you do
I want you to love me
And tell me I’m the only one
I want to be the face you see
When you close your eyes
I want to be the touch
You need every single day
I want to be the eyes
That looks deep into your soul
I want to be the part of you
You just can’t live without
I want to be your world
Be everything you ask for
I want to be your reality
Whatever this means and takes
I want to be your fantasy
Be let into your innermost wishes
I want to be your woman
And satisfy your every desire
I want you to need me
Need me like I need you

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	Is that a song or a poem? Did you write this yourself? I like it very much whatever it is. It's so meaningful, so well structured. It's so poetic, so lyrical, so touching and moving. I like it loads.
	Posted Jul 10, 2008 at 02:33 AM by omaks

	Mulan, Have you considered a career as a lyricist? I can just imagine that poem being sung as a romantic ballad by lover to lovee.
	Posted Jul 10, 2008 at 08:30 AM by Shoko Loko Bangoshe

Omaks, yeah I wrote it somtime ago. I prefer to call them poems cos there's no tune to go with them. Thanks for your lovely comments, I appreciate them...

Shoks, I would like to be one but still haven't found the person to make the music. Now I know you have the software, I am preparing my beggars cap...

Here's a tip, most of my poems were conceived as lyrics accompanying some of romantic scenes in novels I have written in case they ever make it to the small or big screen. Dreams eh?

Posted Jul 10, 2008 at 12:06 PM by mulan mulan is offline

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Dreams eh?

Poetic Mulan,

Dare to dream jare. Me likey the poem!

Posted Jul 10, 2008 at 06:53 PM by Anike
Thanks Anike, I will keep the dream alive...

Posted Jul 11, 2008 at 05:17 PM by mulan
I couldn't help but come back for another helping of the beautiful poem served by you, mulan. How so true!!

Posted Jul 29, 2008 at 12:18 PM by omaks
Its so tangible, I can touch it. I feel you, my dear.

Posted Aug 28, 2008 at 12:45 PM by Chief Kalu
I like, very much!

Posted Aug 29, 2008 at 04:32 AM by Lotus Flower

When Love Revengs

That you leave so me breathless
Is proof that I need you like O2
That I feel you in your absence
Says you are in my mind always
That thoughts of you consume me
Says a lot about my love for you
That I see you in my Dreams
Means my love for you is Blind
That your touch tingles my Skin
Says Im an addict of your touch.
That you can read me so well
Make you my perfect Soulmate.
That I can't stay long from you
Says you're my other half.
That you make me so satisfied
Says you mean the world to me.
That I practically feel your love
Means you are my Reality.
That you feature in my Fantasies
Means you're my own Fantasia.
That I never so desired a Woman
Makes you my One and Only.
Be rest assured that I need you
Far more than you ever knew.

Willam H. Shaukspeayre.
MXCVIII

Posted Sep 10, 2008 at 04:45 AM by Auspicious Auspicious is offline

Auspeee, the rhyming in yours is fantastic! I bow...

Posted Oct 6, 2008 at 12:24 PM by mulan